Tips For Writers – Over And Over

I run across writing tips all the time.  Maybe that’s because I keep looking for them.  A lot of them seem to be pretty redundant, but I keep reading them whenever I see them, because even when somebody says the same thing somebody else said, they frequently say it in a new way.  It always gives a bit of fresh perspective, maybe a new way of doing what you’ve been trying to do that makes it easier.  And every time I read the same advice, it’s reinforced and bolsters my resolve.  At least a little.

There are a few points I try to focus on, and I string them together into something of a mantra.  If I tell it to myself often enough, maybe I’ll have the tight focus that will keep me moving ahead.  Worth a try.  It’s like this:

Make time.  Persist.  Rewrite.

That pretty much says it all, right there in the proverbial nutshell.  It covers most of the basics, at least.  The important thing is that you have to keep it in mind and take it to heart.  And those specific thoughts are recurring themes in tips from others, just laid out a bit differently, which enhances perspective in case that makes it easier to keep it in mind and take it to heart.

So there I was, wandering around the internet, and I found a few tips consolidated from this year’s Writer’s Digest Annual Conference…and there was my little mantra, splattered all through everybody else’s explanations of what helps you be a good writer.  But with perspective.

So it’s worth passing along to whoever might be interested.  And if you really want to be a good writer, you should be interested.  Never pass up advice.  You should think it over and decide if it’s right for you, but don’t pass it by, because you never know if this might be the big revelation you need.  That tip was free.  You’re welcome.

Here’s what the Writer’s Digest folks came up with:

10 Favorite Writing Tips from Successful Authors

If you ask 10 different writers for tips on writing, chances are you’ll get 10 completely different—sometimes contradictory—pieces of advice, as the writing process is a little different for every author. There are some fundamental truths that most writers agree on, though, particularly when it comes to approaching first drafts and committing to the process of writing itself.

We asked some of our WDC19 speakers for their favorite writing tips, and their responses were practical, inspirational, and—somewhat surprisingly—pretty consistent.

CARLA HOCH (Fight Write, WD Books): Tosca Lee once told me to write the first draft like nobody will read it. That really takes the pressure off.

STEVEN JAMES (Synapse, Thomas Nelson): Never fall in love with your first draft. Too many people with great ideas end up settling on an early draft when they really need to keep revising their story. I remember revising the first chapter to one of my books more than 50 times. It was brutal, but essential. That opening chapter remains one of the most powerful I’ve ever written.

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Networking For Writers

I’ve always recoiled at the term “networking.”  It always makes me think of people in business suits trading business cards and talking about having “my people get with your people” and “doing lunch”…a lot of high-falutin’ stuff for some guy who’d just as soon wear his jeans and sweatshirt to the burger joint and grab a cup of coffee and jawjack for a while with a buddy.  Well, if we can just squeeze our brains around it, it’s really the same thing.

A large chunk of writers prefer to sit in a cave and write, or just be around close friends.  We’re not extroverts.  Yes, some are, and they enjoy the networking thing, but the rest of us have to force ourselves to get out there and meet people who can help us with our careers.  And on the flip side, to help others with their careers.

You don’t have to jump into it up to your neck without dipping your toe in to test the waters first.  You can do it gradually and comfortably.  Think about it.  Learn about it.  See what other people are doing and find out most of them are actually a lot like you.  And once you figure that out, it’s easier.

So here to explain that and discuss some ways to go about it is an article I found on The Creative Penn website by Chris Robley from BookBaby.com.  It gives you plenty to think about but in a fairly short article that’s…I promise!…totally painless.  Just note that this article is a few years old, though most of the info is pretty timeless.  Some technology is more current, but just add in Facebook and Instagram when he talks about Twitter and you’ll do fine.  Take a look.

7 Networking Tips for Authors

Networking with other authors is one of the best ways to keep motivated and also to learn more about writing, publishing and book marketing. I learn every day from my author network and I wouldn’t be without it. But networking takes some work, both online and in the real world. In this article Chris Robley from BookBaby.com offers some tips to help authors get the most out of networking.

The verb form of “network” is a curious thing.

I’m no etymologist, but I’ll bet it grew out of an archaic Latin or Germanic word that meant, “Hey, get off your lazy butt and go make some friends for a change!” I imagine shy Virgil being told by his father to leave the farm and meet some nice politicians. Poetry needs patronage, after all!

I know, I know. Solitary creative-types (ummm, writers!) despise glad-handing.  But networking doesn’t have to be a dirty word. In this post I hope to explain why networking (or forging solid professional relationships with other folks in your surrounding literary spheres) is essential, and how you can make the right connections without that icky feeling afterwards.

Why do writers need to network? Why doesn’t my work speak for itself?

Firstly, if a book could talk it would take 3 days to tell its tale. YOU have to speak for your work before anyone else is going to take the time to actually read it. (And speak quickly, for attention spans are shrinking!) Networking is one way of getting your foot in the door to give that initial pitch.

Secondly, in a world with lots of talent, success requires more than simply being great. If two deserving submissions are under consideration by an editor, which one do you think will be accepted? – The one written by the author who did the more effective networking, of course!

It’s a given in the business world that people do favors for their friends, or as Derek Sivers says, Life is like high school. It’s all about who you know, how socially charming you are, what scene you’re in, what you wear, what parties you’re at, flirting, and being cool.”

No, you shouldn’t just stay at your writing desk for the next 20 years and pray for a publishing miracle. You have to get up, get out, and meet people.

The good news is that the folks you need to meet aren’t necessarily uber-hip socialites, beautiful and fit fashionistas, or intimidating rock stars. They’re writers, editors, publishers—lovers of words—people just like you!

You can do it. Here’s how.

1. Start slow and adjust your expectations.

Not everyone storms a scene like Dylan in Greenwich Village.  You don’t have to “arrive,” fully formed and trumpets blaring.

Get to know one person at a time, and stay in it for the long haul. Wade in the shallow end of your local literary community for a while. Maybe even show your face a few times at readings and other events before you start introducing yourself.

You might be itching to meet the book reviewer from your city’s newspaper, but if they see you around town a few times in all the right places, they might start thinking they need to meet YOU!

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Tracking Queries

Everybody needs a handy tool to get stuff done.  Doesn’t really matter what you’re doing…there’s something out there that’s just handy for doing it, and once you find it, you wonder how you ever did whatever-it-is-you’re-doing without it.  You know you have an example.

Well, it’s a basic principle of the publishing world that you need an agent if you write a book and want that book to be published by a big publishing house that will do all your heavy lifting to get that book out in the world and reel in a bazillion dollars for you.  And how do you get said agent to love you and want to be your agent?  You send a query that will make her drool for the opportunity.

So, what are the odds that the first query you send out will nail that agent for you?  Skimpy.  Yes, it happens like a bolt out of the blue for a lot of writers, but they happen to be a teensy-weensy percentage.  Sorry about that.  Thank goodness for word processing programs, email, and web-based query manager programs…you can crank out a lot of them without nearly the effort that was needed a decade ago.

Enter Query Tracker.  I was guided to this program a couple of years ago by a writers’ forum I had joined and fumbled around with for some time.  I’m here to save you a little fumble time.  The site is at https://querytracker.net/ and is quite the handy gadget.

Query Tracker won’t write your query for you, though it will help you find examples of successful queries to emulate, if you’d like.  Where it had the most benefit for me was in finding agents who were in the market for what I was writing.  You can filter your search for agents by the genres they’re looking for, by name, by agency they work for, or by whether they’re currently open to queries.  The listings will give their email addresses, mailing addresses, preferences for how to submit the queries, website addresses, and even success stories from writers who managed to land them as agents.

A great benefit of this website is that it will maintain a database that tracks all the queries you’ve sent out and to whom, when you sent them, and what the status of your query is.  It will keep track of whether an agent has asked you for a full or partial manuscript.  It will also show you feedback from other authors on each agent, so you can get an idea of what kind of response time to expect, whether there are problems with communication or contract issues, and whether agents provide feedback on your submission.  And even if they’re nice.

And best of all…it’s free.  Yes, you can get a premium version with extra features, and it may very well behoove you to do so.  But you can just open an account and play with it and see what it will do for you, absolutely free, and take your time making up your mind about whether premium is what you want.  But the free version will do a LOT.

Oh, by the way…you still have to have a really good manuscript and an awesome query to land the agent.  That’s extra.  Sorry about that.

Check it out…it might do you a lot of good.  Couldn’t hurt!

 

Veterans Day

I was mulling over some thoughts about what Veterans Day means to me, and happened across the text of a speech I gave 18 years ago while deployed to Ali Al Salem Air Base in Kuwait.  It was in 2001, just two months after the 9/11 attacks.  I was speaking to our troops, who had seen their mission of enforcing the No-Fly Zone in Iraq suddenly double into supporting the forward movement of troops for Operation Enduring Freedom into Afghanistan.  And they had no idea what would happen next or when they’d get to go home.  What I said to them still holds today, and is for all veterans, especially those still on active duty who are out there guarding our way of life right now:

“Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.  I was asked to provide my perspective on what Veterans Day means, and it remains to be seen whether it was courageous or merely foolhardy to give a microphone to a Chief and ask him his opinion.  I’ll try to limit my opinions to just Veterans Day for the moment.  However, if I were to talk about all the things I’ve thought about Veterans Day, and what it means, I’d be talking all day.  Don’t worry…I won’t do that to you…..I’ll let Lt Col Rose do that to you in a few minutes.

My perspective on Veterans Day comes down to quality of life.  I keep an eye on quality of life issues, because it’s part of my job and because I happen to live here along with everybody else.  I hear complaints about the heat, blowing sand, flies, and having to share bathrooms with 50 other people, and every day I hear somebody say, “I sure will be glad when I can go home.”  And I know that for 225 years, American military troops have been saying the same thing, from the snows of Valley Forge, to the steaming jungles of Vietnam, to the vast deserts of Southwest Asia, and just about everywhere in between.  For about 28 years now, I’ve been hearing troops say they want to go home, because they want to be with their loved ones and enjoy the American way of life.

Well, if that’s what they want, why did they put on uniforms and go to faraway places and give up that American way of life?  Because their Uncle Sam said he needed them.  Because they loved their country and their way of life, and they knew that they and their loved ones might lose that way of life if somebody didn’t go when Uncle Sam called.  They chose to answer that call, and preserve that way of life.

And that’s the quality of life I was really talking about in the first place…the quality of the American way of life is what Veterans Day means to me.  Because it’s not just what you’re willing to endure…it’s what you’re willing to sacrifice that defines your character.  Our quality of life is such that our citizens will put on uniforms and pledge to protect and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, and go to faraway places and give up that quality of life for a while, to make sure it will still be there for their loved ones, and it’ll be there when they come home.

The citizens who have done that are our veterans.  The impressive thing about our veterans, in addition to the spirit that drives them, is who they are.  I never thought about it much until the first time I saw a funeral with a military honor guard.  They weren’t active duty military…they were members of the American Legion in my home town.  I grew up knowing these people, but I never even knew they had been in the service of their country until I saw them in their uniforms, firing a salute to honor one of their comrades in arms…my Dad.  I saw bankers, insurance salesmen, truck drivers, and farmers, and it came home to me that people from every walk of life are veterans of military service.  To me, they are the backbone of America.  They are what makes our country great, because they are the fundamental quality in our way of life.  I know this because I’ve worked with the men and women who have served in the United States Armed Forces for 28 years, and I run into them everywhere.  I grew up with them, they’ve been my neighbors, they’ve been my friends, and their ranks happen to include my grandfather, my dad, my brother, my father-in-law, my wife, and my son, among so many others.  I know their strength in adversity and their dedication to the principles of freedom.  I have great faith in them.  They are my heroes.

Because for the last 225 years there have been military troops who did what their country asked of them, because they made sacrifices, because they lived “service before self”…these are the veterans we honor today.

But we don’t honor them because they put up with uncomfortable weather, and sand, and flies.  I like the way Tom Clancy put it in one of his earlier books, and my apologies to him if I don’t remember it quite perfectly, but it went something like this:  “One of the benefits of being in the military, aside from the opportunity to make less money than an equally talented civilian, is the off chance of being killed.”

You see, they knew that, and still they went.  That’s the kind of love of our country and the spirit that gives us our quality of life…that people would be willing to put themselves in harm’s way to ensure that the American way of life endures.  That doesn’t mean they want that harm to find them…I know I don’t.  I want to go home in about a month, and be able to say, thanks to our Top 3 fundraiser, that I’ve been there, done that, and got the T-shirt.  But do you know what my father-in-law can say?  “Been there, done that, got the Purple Heart.”  The dedication to our country and the principles of freedom are what has given our veterans the courage to face whatever may come, and their courage and their character are what give me faith in the future of America, which brings me to another facet of quality of life.

When TSgt Wilbur was setting this up, he told me I was invited because I could give the perspective of the old guy, the one who’d been around a while, the one who was on his way out the door.  Thank you, Sergeant Wilbur, for bringing that up so tactfully.  But it’s true…within a couple of years, depending on Stop Loss and High Year of Tenure waivers, of course, I’ll be retired.  I’ll be sitting on the beach somewhere, living in the great comfort afforded me by my huge retirement check, and I won’t be coming back to this beach.  I may be a vague memory for some people, and there may be some comment now and then about that crusty old Chief with the big camouflaged coffee cup…and it’s a shame the words “crusty” and “old” always show up at the same time as the word “Chief,” but that’s life… but I won’t be here to guide, advise, mentor, or otherwise influence all the actions that will be going on around the world, that will keep my country free and my way of life intact.  But I’m not worried, because that’s where my faith in the veterans of the American Armed Forces comes in.

Because who am I talking about?  You.  You are also the veterans who are being honored today.  You are the people with the willingness to put on a uniform and go to faraway places, who pledged to protect and defend the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, who are willing to put yourselves in harm’s way to ensure that the American way of life endures.  You are the ones who have earned my faith and my respect, and I know that you, and others just like you, will be making sure that I have the freedom and the safety to sit on that beach and live the quality of life that comes with being an American.  You’ll be taking care of me, and you’ll be taking care of my country.  You are veterans of the United States Armed Forces, and you are my heroes.  And for what you have done, and for what you will do, I thank you.”

 

Thought For The Week

War is an ugly thing, but not the ugliest of things. The decayed and degraded state of moral and patriotic feeling which thinks that nothing is worth war is much worse. The person who has nothing for which he is willing to fight, nothing which is more important than his own personal safety, is a miserable creature and has no chance of being free unless made and kept so by the exertions of better men than himself.

— John Stuart Mill